Dry Dry Desert

I just made a level called the Dry Dry Desert. It's not very long but I think I did good.

~Ben

P.S. Story: Luigi exits a oasis resort to spend time in the desert, when he finds signs from an unknown person who thinks Luigi is an idiot. You'll face koopas, goombas, and bottomless pits in this level.

Hmmm.. This was a really short level. Okay... Rating time!

Level Design
The level layout wasn't bad.. the only problems i have is the sign at the beginning, first. I have no idea what your talk about..

The sign near the end is virtually a death-trap which i don't know if it was meant to be humorous but i didn't find it so. :P

Not the worst but not the best, i'm sad to say.

My Rating: 4/10

Graphics
Fit the level okay.

My Rating: 5/10

Music Choice
It fit the level well.

My Rating: 6/10

Scenery
You over used scenery at the beginning and it tapered to nothing as the level went on.. I didn't see anything else until the end.

My Rating: 2/10

Overall
Level Design: 4/10
Graphics: 5/10
Music Choice: 6/10
Scenery: 2/10

The idea was that the guy who put up all the signs thinks that Luigi is stupid. Didn't you read the second sign. Later in the episode, Luigi gets a Blue Yoshi. You use that to get all the coins. The first sign is a trap to lure Luigi into the actual level, adding an extra "s" to Desert to make "dessert". Maybe my next level will be better. P.S.I don't know if its clear at the beginning, but Luigi is exiting an oasis. Just letting you know.

.. I'm just sayin' no one would have known so of that. It wasn't noted in your first post. xP

Doh! I hate it when I screw things like that up!

It's no prob. Just add that stuff and it'll be fine :D

I fixed it.

Alright then, your probably gonna need others to play as well.

OK. Can you tell me the best way to advertise a level?

Signature. Asking on chat, pretty much simple things.