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Metalhead
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3/8/2013, 4:42 pm
Well Here We are,The Level Is Heavily Based On Megaman Levels But Its Not That Much,Anyway It Also contains The Beta White Pikmin Playable Sadly The Playable Its Incomplete (It Only Has Toad-2 And mask)

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-Squishy Rex's Blooming Lakitu
-Shocker's Lakitu
-Mariowizzerd's Checkpoint Box
And Some Other Graphics That Looks Like To Not Have The Author Name

Enjoy And Review It Plz?? :L


Last edited by Metalhead on 3/8/2013, 4:59 pm; edited 1 time in total
MarioWizzerd
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Desert Mine  Empty Re: Desert Mine

3/8/2013, 4:52 pm
Looks not bad.I don't like the overworld.Anyway,Downloading...
And checkpoint box my gfx Desert Mine  1036251537
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Metalhead
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3/8/2013, 5:00 pm
Ok,Edited The Post And Put Your Gfx Also I uploading An New Download Becuase Of An Checkpoint Error Were You Have An Insta-Kill
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Desert Mine  Empty Re: Desert Mine

3/11/2013, 5:34 pm
Very Good Man! The Download have limit? (Ex: 3 days, 1 day... to delete)
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3/11/2013, 5:43 pm
I Think Like 1 Year Or Maybe It Don't Have Limit Koopa Anyway,people Think I Rushed At The level I Guess And Yes,The Level Did Take 4 Hours To Finish it
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3/15/2013, 5:20 pm
Well this level had a good design. And I realy love your creative ideas what makes this level not boring, cause it has a cave section, mountain section, and overworld section. The length is perfect. I also enjoyed the music. But... this level has also some realy bad parts. I will tell you why: First of all you used almost no bgos in the whole level only a few fences. Also the smb3 and smw graphics don't match together. The minecart section was very cool though! I felt that I was playing donkey kong country again. One more bad thing, In my opinion 2 bosses was realy not needed. I would remove the lakitu boss cause it is not a sky level and doesn't fit the theme. And cause it is just pointless. I would also replace the ladders by smw vines. And add some bgos! realy do that! It will make this level look a lot better. I think also you need to add a bg to the boss sections. Cause black is just boring.

Overall I would rate this level: 14/20

Because it is a very creative and good designed level, and you realy got potention to be a very good level designer, but it is got a few flaws that you realy need to fix. For the rest keep it up!
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3/15/2013, 6:17 pm
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Thanks For The Review Darkyoshi! Maybe I'll Fix The Level
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3/15/2013, 7:43 pm
looks good
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3/16/2013, 5:22 am
Metalhead wrote:Thanks For The Review Darkyoshi! Maybe I'll Fix The Level
I realy would suggest to do that, it would make the level much better. If you got problems with the bgos I can pm some to you. But only if you want to.
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