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- BenAlon74Standard Member
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Dry Dry Desert
6/15/2011, 3:24 pm
First topic message reminder :
I just made a level called the Dry Dry Desert. It's not very long but I think I did good.
~Ben
P.S. Story: Luigi exits a oasis resort to spend time in the desert, when he finds signs from an unknown person who thinks Luigi is an idiot. You'll face koopas, goombas, and bottomless pits in this level.
I just made a level called the Dry Dry Desert. It's not very long but I think I did good.
~Ben
P.S. Story: Luigi exits a oasis resort to spend time in the desert, when he finds signs from an unknown person who thinks Luigi is an idiot. You'll face koopas, goombas, and bottomless pits in this level.
- CosmicStandard Member
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Re: Dry Dry Desert
7/21/2011, 9:38 am
Here is my review.
Graphics
They are okay. They fit the desert theme, but you only used scenery in the first part of the level.
5/10
Music
Desert Music fit the theme.
7/10
Level Design
Its a very short level, with barely any challenge. Barely any replay value.
3/10
Overall
5/10
What you could do/add
-Give the level more scenery.
-Lengthen the level.
-Add a bit more enemies. Maybe even a boss.
Graphics
They are okay. They fit the desert theme, but you only used scenery in the first part of the level.
5/10
Music
Desert Music fit the theme.
7/10
Level Design
Its a very short level, with barely any challenge. Barely any replay value.
3/10
Overall
5/10
What you could do/add
-Give the level more scenery.
-Lengthen the level.
-Add a bit more enemies. Maybe even a boss.
- Kay FaradaySuper Member
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Re: Dry Dry Desert
8/8/2011, 10:21 am
Sorry, man. Your level is unapproved for this time. You can edit it again and try to make it better.
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