Contest level: The Galaxy Star

Well... Cloud has cancelled the contest... and he said i can post my level: The Galaxy Star!

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Some Screenies:

Hope you like my level!

And Some Credits Finally:

cool level, I fell into space seven times XD

Yay! Be more carefully :D

yes, I did and save pat! (and kill bowser with 2 shots)

Hehe... Bowser Dies!

I'm not complaining about the screen transitions but I HATE THEM.

Really? I'm so sorry... I didn't explained the level...
You play as Mario or Luigi. He needs to go through "planets" (like in SMG) to get the objective: save a star!
So the screens aren't so much descriptives... I'll try to make a bigger version of every planet.

This level seem to look pretty decent. Although the level seems to look like it lacks in Background Objects. There is also some clash with the SMB3 and SMW Graphics, also the level design seems pretty stale telling from the screens because of the fact that there doesn't seem to be a single slope involved. Now I am no trying to be mean or anything, I am just trying to give you constructive critisim ( or however you spell that word ) to help improve your level designing skills. So this looks okay, but it needs some improvement in my opinion.

The screen transitions screw me up because it stops my momentum and makes me want to go the opposite way when I know something is there and I died many time.

Oh... well... I know some things are bad... maybe I'll do a better version when I can...